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[harena]

As some of you may already know, i have an Etsy site where i wanted to try and sell some of my stuff (soap, lipbalm & yarn items) that i've never quite finished because of Overwhelm and the feeling that there are elements missing from it. So, i ask you, my friends, please go to Harena's Homemade Soap and tell me what you think. If you were going to order something from that site, what would it need to corner your sale? What's Missing? (besides actual items for sale, i am aware of that one :P) What needs removing?

Be honest, i need to get my butt in gear. (Excepting the banner, that's the only thing i won't compromise on)

Comments

[sedge]

The only thing I can see is that as soon as you put something in there (or sooner), you should take out the "still very much under construction" from the description. I find the phrase offputting: all websites are under construction even if they look finished, because of the changing nature of the web.

Otherwise it all looks fine to me!

[harena]

Done'd! That was easiest tweak! ;D

[sedge]

Yay!

(much easier than label-tweaking.)

[sorcyress]

It looks good to me!

I would possibly rewrite the introduction so it doesn't get cut off by the "read more" so awkwardly.

Your policies seem extremely fair.

I like it!

~Sor

[harena]

Yeah, the Intro Awkwardness has been pointed out and the version that is there now is substantially better than how it was before. i think when i originally wrote that thing, Etsy did NOT truncate it with a Read More... thingy and there is no way to config it so it doesn't do that. It boggles my mind 'cause there's a WHOLE freaking page there; what need is there to save space? Ye gods.

Anyway, thank you so much for giving me some of your valuable time to look at it! ♥