harena: (Soap Logo!)
Harena ([personal profile] harena) wrote2011-04-06 02:01 pm

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As some of you may already know, i have an Etsy site where i wanted to try and sell some of my stuff (soap, lipbalm & yarn items) that i've never quite finished because of Overwhelm and the feeling that there are elements missing from it. So, i ask you, my friends, please go to Harena's Homemade Soap and tell me what you think. If you were going to order something from that site, what would it need to corner your sale? What's Missing? (besides actual items for sale, i am aware of that one :P) What needs removing?

Be honest, i need to get my butt in gear. (Excepting the banner, that's the only thing i won't compromise on)
sorcyress: Drawing of me as a pirate, standing in front of the Boston Citgo sign (Default)

[personal profile] sorcyress 2011-04-07 01:58 am (UTC)(link)
It looks good to me!

I would possibly rewrite the introduction so it doesn't get cut off by the "read more" so awkwardly.

Your policies seem extremely fair.

I like it!

~Sor